I get the whole it's-a-fantasy bit, on board for that, but it'd be nice if the art wasn't all over the map, and I cordially dislike the exaggerated look. Imagining what the game would look like if all the art was similarly exaggerated, my reaction is EWWWW. What's next, sydney-opera-house shoulder pads on all the armor?
I love the detail in the club, just tone the exaggeration down some, make it fit better with the gritty-realism motif please? Comic exaggeration is fine in the biker or the cop, they're already plainly fantasy elements drawn exaggerated to clue you in that this guy's Not Normal. Is there anything Not Normal about that iron club's behavior? Does it hit five times harder than the existing iron club would?